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:iconxeon1:
comments on how to improve please

background??
header?
where should the links be?

etc. :D plzz rele neeed comments on how 2 improve

Im trying to have this template like fun if you know what i mean..its directed to 13-17 year olds

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Darker Background
More detailed Menu bar at the top
Colour on links at the bottom
Pattern on the background
More glossy pink bar just under the title
Words on the top right
Wavey Lines
Audio control
Arrows on headings/possible links
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:iconblackvibes:
How is this created?

It seems beautiful! :)
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:iconbyakuga:
~byakuga Feb 5, 2008  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Yeah nice ! :)
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:iconmaxspencer:
!MaxSpencer Nov 2, 2007   Digital Artist
lol obviously didnt take anything i said onboard XD.
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:iconmolotovruss:
Slick, sexy and... pink!

Are you in Young Enterprise? We did that at school! We owned a company that traded on eBay, made a fortune!
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:iconxeon1:
lol yeah :D we ent alowd to do anything on eBay now hehe...
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:iconmolotovruss:
HAHA!

Interesting! So what is it that you're doing? I assume you have like a business advisor, what are they like?
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:icontcflashguy:
!tcflashguy Oct 27, 2007   Interface Designer
creative - yes, but i hate small font sizes - improve the top menu or eliminate it - it seems to be out of place compared to the rest of the layout.
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:iconxeon1:
yeah i liked the sound system on the pink bar.. butt didnt no where.. i did put it over the Pink graident but the colour went slightly... what about if i put the sound system

with the menu bar... when its bigger its got more detail in . . . andd how do you think i could improve it ?

its not the full size. . . ive set it to 1024 width when its 1280 width :)
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